Tuesday 31 March 2015

Mikailah's Storm Water Drain Game Writing

I am learning to write a recount using who, what, where and when.

On Monday Room 18 went to the auditorium to see a show the show was called the stormwater drain game the family was busy. The kids had to clean the car their mum said and the hose was broken. The boy wanted to go to his friends house. Him and his friend wanted to go to the beach.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

I like the way that you have used who, what, where and when in your writing. Well done!